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"And we're back, Ladies and Gentlemen! To...

POP!

THAT!

BELLYYYYY!!"

Everybody chanted and cheered as the game show host, John Burton, dressed in his flashy suit, sporting a wide, bright smile, walked in, waving at his audience, positioning himself in the center of the cone of light shinning from above. Everyone was excited for another new episode of their favorite game show. The audience  were stomping their feet and fist pumping the air and the fans at home were at the edge of their seats, grabbing onto their coal and chips in sheer anticipation. Everyone knew was this game show was about and they were all giddy for a reason.

"If you're just tuning in, allow me to catch you up to speed. We've had three contestants try their hand at trying to eat beyond their limit in an attempt to pop their bellies. Our last contestant, Margaret, got close but something in her head prevented her from eating that last bite." the host looked down in disappointment, the audience nodding along, "But we still have one more contestant left, and I have a feeling this one will go all the way! Everyone give a round of applause to.... Kaaatrinaaaaaaaaaaa!"

As Katrina entered in her colorful jumpsuit, giving small jumps of excitement and waving to the crowd, they applauded and whistled for the new contestant walking out the doorway. She meets the host at the center of the stage and gives him a small hug.

“I’m glad you could join us, Katrina,” said the host, patting his guest on the shoulder.

“Happy to be here, Mr. Burton!” Katrina nearly squealed, a big grin glued between the bright cheeks on her face.

“Please, Mr. Burton was my father,” John Burton responded before turning to the camera, “Call me John.” The audience responded with laughter, though a slight groan was heard from the corner of the stage.

“Ok!” agreed Katrina excitedly.

“So Katrina, are you ready to make your belly explode?” asked John the host eagerly, grinning widely, showing his unnaturally white teeth.

“I sure am, Mr. Burton!” responded Katrina, receiving a serious look from John but interrupts him before he can correct, “I had a really big meal before I got on the set, as you can well see.” She said, patting the small bulge poking out of her middle.

“Well, won’t you look at that?” the host responded, rubbing her small belly, adding a small “By the way, call me John, I can’t stress that enough,” before turning his attention back to his guests swollen middle. “It does my heart proud to know that we have such dedicated fans. Like last week, when one of our guests overdid, she was doing the same thing, and she ended up prematurely exploding before we could get with the good stuff.”

The host nodded, remembering that time, some of the audience joined him in reminiscing it, looking off into the distance.

“Anyway! So Katrina, you know how this show is played, correct?” asked John, turning to his guest, Katrina.

“I do, Mr. Burton!” Katrina responded cheerfully.

“Please… It’s John, not Mr. Burton… just John” the host repeated, a low tone of annoyance in his speech before returning back to his loud, jolly tone, “But for those who are just tuning in, lets explain to them the rules.”

The stage in the back lit up brightly, showcasing a large, towering, and brightly colored wheel staged in the center of the background. The wheel was divided into dozens and dozens of sections, each one with a picture of a delicious dessert.

“So here’s how this show goes. We ask a member of the audience to give this wheel a big spin, and whichever desert the falls on the arrow down here, that’ll be the desert that our dear Katrina will eat. This process shall repeat until Kat’s belly can’t hold any more and she explodes… or when she wimp out…” the host groaned, almost disappointedly, “But come on, she’s our last guest, why on would she? Right?” asked the host, John, staring at Katrina with wide eyes. Katrina responded with a nod and an excited smile.

“Alright, so let’s have our first spinner!” the host announced, walking up to the audience, scanning for someone who was pretty enough for camera.

“You sir!” the host said, pointing to a dashing, young man. “Me?” “Yes you, come on up!” the host chimed, pulling the man up and leading him to the wheel. “Now give this wheel a big spin!” The man reached high up, grabbing a peg and pulling down, sending the wheel into a rapid spiral, sounding a round of loud clicks. As the wheel settled, the arrow pointed to the picture of a pie with the number 10 above it.

“Ohoho! Looks like Katrina’s first desert will a pie! Oh, but look, not just pie it’ll be, how many people?”

“TEN!

WHOLE!

PIES!”

“Yes, ten pies. Sandra, will you do the honor?”

A women dressed in a stunning red dress, appeared from behind the curtains, pushing a cart that held ten freshly made, delicious, mouthwatering pies. Katrina’s mouth dropped as she witnessed the spectacle.

“Katrina! Are you ready to devour these ten pies?” John asked loudly, extravagantly pointing to the cart filled with the warm pies.

“I sure am, Mr. Burton!” Katrina chimed happily, grabbing a pie tin.

“Jesus fuckin-oh!” the host mumbled under his breath before receiving a jab to his side by Sandra, “Alright, well I admire your enthusiasm, Katrina!” John began, once again in his jovial mood. “Now let’s see if your stomach can catch up with it!” he grinned.

Katrina giggled excitedly before digging into the pies, biting into them before slurping up its cherry, apple or pumpkin innards. The multiple pies were already taking an effect on the guests already stuffed belly as it began to swell larger with each pie she devoured, growing at the steady pace as it stretched out the fabric of the jump suit. The audiences went wild as upon noticing Katrina’s growing midriff. Sandra had provided a chair for the guest to rest on as she smacked on more delicious pies, feeding her ever-growing gut.

Once the pies were eaten, the process was repeated once again. A beautiful, young woman was chosen, the big wheel was spun, the arrow pointed to a dozen jelly rolls and Sandra wheeled in Katrina’s next desert. Then the audience would watch with glee as Katrina devoured the jelly rolls before her, smearing her face, and stretching jumpsuit, with red jelly. After every couple of jelly rolls, she would wipe her face and continue on, very much aware of the growing beneath her suit, giving off the image that she was expecting, signaling the impending doom of this guests growing belly.

As the wheel spun more, Katrina’s belly grew bigger, billowing out in all directions as more and more pastries were eaten by the ravenous guest, the host maintaining a jolly demeanor as these events played, giving off playful quips here and there.

After the fifth spin, the last one rewarding Katrina with half a dozen cakes, adding to the already swollen orb of Katrina’s belly, the host interrupted the scene. Katrina’s belly had grown to ridiculous sizes, obviously dwarfing the guest, along with everyone else on set. Her gut stood sturdy, barely brushing the waxed floor of the stage. Audible groans could be heard from within the overstuffed gut. The jumpsuit has done a fantastic job in keeping itself together as the contents within it has expanded to grand sizes, giving the belly the look of an overinflated elastic ball. Her skin, on the other hand, was straining terribly, trying to prevent Katrina’s wish of being splattered across the floor from being fulfilled. Hidden beneath jumpsuit, stretch marks had crisscrossed all across the red shaded belly of hers. Unaware, but secretly hoping, of the belly imminent disaster, the host approached his swollen guest.

“So Katrina,” he began, leaning close to the overfed guest sprawled on the overbearing chair, rubbing her gut gently, “How are you feeling right now?”

“I… I’m feeling good, John,” she responded, much to the host’s delight, a small groan escaping her lips, her belly seemed to be dealing more than it can handle, “I think I’m… I’m close to exploding now…” she nodded, trying to contain the contents in her gut long enough as to not explode prematurely, “I think I might go off any, oh! Any second now!” she squealed uncomfortably, felling her belly convulse as the contents continued to shift within her, causing her gut swell some more.

“Well I’m glad to hear that!” he responded, turning to the camera, “So, this is the moment we’ve been waiting for! Will Katrina finally detonate, splattering the audience and everyone else on the set with her digested pastries, or will she wimp out and be known as the first woman to cause Pop That Belly to air without anyone exploding?” he paused briefly, looking at the camera intensively, “We will find out… after these messages!”

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“Well come back to…

POP!

THAT!

BELLY!”

The set light up and the audience applauded. Since the pause, Katrina’s belly has grown a bit over time, quivering slightly over the building pressure of all the pastries expanding and shifting inside of her belly as it continues to find more room in the ever tightening belly of Katrina. The low groan has now build up to a roaring storm as the gut is nearing its demise. The host, John Burton, and his assistant, Sandra, are now standing behind a clear blast shield to protect themselves from the impending splat.

“Welcome back! When we left, Katrina here told us that she felt like she was going to explode any second now. But thanks to some sheer determination, she had made it past the commercial break. So tell us Katrina, are we still a go on the whole ‘possibly exploding’ situation or did feeling pass?” the host asked, yelling from behind the panel, waving his arms to Katrina, who couldn’t hear him past her noisy belly, but guessed that he is asking about her current, explosive condition.

Katrina tried to answer but couldn’t get passed “I…” before moaning in an extreme discomfort and attended to his overbearing gut, trying to maintain her gluttonous and overblown form until she has her cue to go off. She resorted to giving John a shaky but reassuring thumb up. The sound team worked hard to make sure the audience, and the viewers at home, were able to hear the host past the thunderous groans coming from the gut.

“Alright people, the moment we’ve all been waiting for. The action that’ll finish off this episode!” he then lowered his voice, as if Katrina was going to hear him through all the groans and creaks emitting from her titanic gut. “Now, we’ll be sending in one our own to go and feed her the morsel that’ll send her gut over the edge. We all know that she’s been holding back so that she can explode on cue, but we think this way will be much better.” The host smiled, watching as one the underpaid interns snuck behind the strained Katrina, he quickly popped a small cupcake into her mouth and ran off set.

Katrina was taken by surprise by this sudden action, confused as to what the host wanted from this. She looked towards him in confusion, seeing him hand-signaling to keep holding. She was willing to try, but she could feel her attempts ra[idly slipping, her gut was readjusting more frantically, her quivering gut growing to a loud tremor as the contents in her belly could find no other place to go but out. As the gurgling pressure within her build, she finally understood what the host was aiming and she was eager to go out this way. As her belly pulsed outwards one last time, growing past its limit, it finally detonated with a resounding

KER-SPLAT!!

The viewers at home were shown a cartoonier explosion, as her detonation was obstructed with a bolded SPLAT!

John Burton emerged from behind the cream covered shield clean, along with his dashing assistant, Sandra, and turned to the smeared audience.

“Well that concludes another episode of

POP!

THAT!

BELLY!

Thanks for joining us, and we hope to see you next week.”

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As the credits rolled, a clip from last week played, where John introduced his next guest, Matilda, who entered with a extremely overstuffed belly, waddling towards him with difficulty. The two chatted about her odd appearance, Matilda showing clear signs of discomfort, rubbing her gut and bending over at one point clutching her belly. Despite all this, Matilda signaled John that she alright and could continue, unaware that her gut had been swelling steadily as her large meal was catching up to her frame.

The two continued with the routine, John explaining the rules of the game before returning every once in awhile to poke fun at Matilda’s bloated form, commenting at how she looks bigger now than before, playfully stepping a few feet back before chuckling at the silliness. John again asks if Matilda is able to continue, noticing a growing discomfort in her actions. Matilda tried to answer but was cut off but a sudden jump in her gut, causing them both to stare at it shocked.

Suddenly Matilda grabbed her belly and cried in pain as her belly began to tremble and quake as her gut was going to meet a premature end. Though she didn’t look as big as Katrina had gotten, it was evident that she was much less resistant when it came to eating big. Her belly jumped forward, growing a tad bigger, suspended in the air for a brief second, Matilda’s eyes rolled back and her mouth held wide open, before disappearing in a screen clearing explosion.

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A small portion of the earnings is donated to the national organization of “Lets End World Hunger Already Association”.
(Disclaimer: I might or might not rant in the description, handle with care)

Alright, so I haven't posted one of these stories in forever! Omg, it was so hard to get myself to do these!

My lack of motivation came because there was a lack of comments or activity on my page, and there was a lack of activity because I hadn't posted any work. And I hadn't posted any work because of the lack of activity. Its a stressing cycle. That amount of time it takes for me to do these stories is way longer than the amount of time these stories stay relevant to strangers inboxes. SO the result is an unmotivated writer with half finished stories, complaining to himself that no one cares anymore. Except for the few.

But what do I expect? This is an account made specifically to get a literal rise out of people. The last thing most horny guys wanna do is chat about unrelated stuff. Trust me, I'm one of them. Which is why I watch accounts that post fetishy stuff along with some normal art, to keep me grounded and hopefully comment more on these drawings that people have worked hard on. Favorites are good too -nodding-

Though now I can see why so few people actually write. Its a lot of hard work to do something to live up with ever growing absence of your work. And the longer you work, the better you think it should be, and then in the end, people are like "I like this" and you're left like 'owo yeah? I broke my back trying to impress you, BRO!' not to say we don't appreciate the small stuff

gotta love the small things too

but it gives a sense of "Whats the point?" why try to impress you guys when a lack of absence will cause a lack of comments and thus a lack of motivation. I'm better off enjoying the small ideas that pop in my heads as I salute the flag to these fetishy ideas.

Not saying I'll do it. If one thing motivates me is the thought of what people will say when they read these stories which (believe it or not) actually motivates me a whole lot. Its not a bad thing to be attention hungry. Just don't do dangerous things to gain it. Just be yourself... and be hopeful too. Always hopeful. Normal for people to crave attention, its what drives us sometimes. Shouldn't be ashamed of something that helps you expand and improve your work, embrace it!

Also, thanks to Bursting-WIth-Jobs to motivate me to work on more of these stories. Makes me feel like I'm relevant again. nice feeling
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DevHeart Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Are they still alive, or is this show pretty much broadcasting LIVE MURDER!??!?!?!
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awesomesir Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2018  Student Digital Artist
This show is kinda messed up!
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OverStuffed Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2018
This turns me on
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awesomesir Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2018  Student Digital Artist
Good
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OverStuffed Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2018
I touched myself to this shit
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OverStuffed Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2018
XD
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Jyellowstudio Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2017  Student Digital Artist
You know... I read this many years ago when I found this story, idk why but, I never realized this story belong to you. In fact I kinda wanted to read this story again since I missed this story and, if I could, I wanna compliment the writer for writing such a bubbly filled comedic story on a gameshow theme about bursting bellies. :meow: I mean, I'm not into bursting bellies but, the way you handle it is just so silly and not so gory makes it cartoony and easy to read. And hey, since I've spoke with you often I can finally make that compliment I've never made back then when I read this. :D

To start off, I just love how you handle your characters in these stories. They give off a charm that sticks in my head. I know you don't want to be known as a man who makes iconic OCs, but a character like John Burton would stick in my head because of how you written them. The way he acts, responds and how he feels makes the character intruging. And I just love how you can manage that. ;P

The writing itself is perfected, all well descriptive and doesn't drag on for the gorging part. The only error I ever notice was this: ra[idly but outside of that, everything else was writing like a surreal cartoon. :dummy:

And since I'm a man who reads description, I'll respond to that too. :) Well I understand how it feels where you work on something really great and then you get like a half ass response with no build up or any in depth criticism. But in a way, even if most can't be impressed at least those who do will be there for yah. I mean look at me, I'm a newbie here on your stuff and already I love your work. :dummy: anyways, it's also nice that you have a nice view on art and stories. while I like belly art and stories it's nice to see regular art to be grounded. Helps balance out a good view. :) And the last bit got to me. :huggle: you have a kind heart and such inspiring words to help other artist be happy to what they post, and wanting the attention we hope is something most of us crave. :meow: I often wish to have more comments, but having sweet friends to chat and posting art I'm proud to share is enough for me to be happy. I still wish to grow bigger on my work but for what I have currently, puts a smile on my face.

Well, this ended up a long ramble ay? XD yeah my bad. But, if it helps you still feel motivated, I love this story. And it deserves a fave, and who cares if someone ask me why I fave this, even if it is fetish, it's a good story. A strange but unique one that deserves as much love as any story. Same goes to your artwork man, they're still great even if they stand for a fetish reason. :meow: besides I'm sure alot of people has small feitsh within them. (One close friend of mine even has one ouo)
But in the end, Sir, Awesomesir, your name stands for why I began to watch yah, you're awesome. :huggle: and you are still a great dude who is always relavent in this big world. ;)
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awesomesir Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2017  Student Digital Artist
:hug: Thanks man! That means a lot to me! I'm really gld you took the time to write all this! :D

Also to clarify, it's not that I don't want to be known for iconic ocs, it's that I don't want ocs I use in my non-fetishy blog to be connected to this fetishy account. I like to be known for my ocs, just not those
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Jyellowstudio Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2017  Student Digital Artist
:huggle: Dude, you deserved it. You have a great talent on writing and art that you deserve at least a more in depth comment.:)

Oh, I understand now. xD I'll admit I was a bit confused on that statement. So thanks for clearing that up. :)
Though, I say some characters in this account has some potential to be used for actual stories, even if they were use in fetish ways it's alright to make them more grounded and relatable. Like examples can be that some character concept here can be reworked to being used in some normal stories you could write. :meow:

To tell you, a close friend of mine usually write some stories that kind contains a bit of fetish things, but yet she can still manage to make them such grounded characters despite being based on fetish like big bellies and stuffing.
Basically, you can still have great OC and insert a bit of a guilty pleasure like stuffing and you can still have a great story. :giggle: If you are ok with it, I can show you a few of her stories to you if you have the time, but if not I understand.:)

But in the end, while I still say you have great characters on both non fetish and fetish account, I still respect your view. :aww: I simply wanna say that there can still be a balance between having an actual story and inserting guilty pleasure of belly stuffing. ;)
But, knowing how so many users would bother you about doing more fetish things and such, I can understand why you wanna avoid that. The internet is full of folks like that. 😰

And I kinda rambles on again huh? ^^; well, my bad.
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awesomesir Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2017  Student Digital Artist
I get you~ :3

Also I'd like to see some of these stories your friend made, interested in reading some of those!
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Jyellowstudio Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2017  Student Digital Artist
Thanks. :meow: For a heads up, I tend to sometimes have long replies so I could make a good point. ^^; But for your sake I'll shorten it anytime. :) (I'm a guy who prefers if people are blatant with me, no need to hide things from me.)

Ok. :meow: She's the best in my opinion so do spend time on her stuff. :D
So Sexy, It Overflows
Spare tires on the subway
Have a rare old time
Back to Bite You in the Blubber 2
Here's a few for you to check out. ;3 She and I also share OC universe together so our OCs can interact with each other easily, which is canon.
Like a big pizza pie, that's amore~
Here's a story with my OC Gabriel, While I don't want people to know about my little belly fetish, I decided that as long as I have some understanding friends that's cool. :) People who don't like me because of it would be my least care, because I know I have more to my own stuff then just belly. ^^;
Anyways do enjoy. :)
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awesomesir Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2017  Student Digital Artist
Ooh, nice choice of stories!
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Jyellowstudio Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2017  Student Digital Artist
Thanks! :D I hope you love them as much as I do! ;P
And hey do leave her a comment, my friend is very kind. :)
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awesomesir Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2017  Student Digital Artist
Will do ;3
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Brubake Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2017
Great cool idea here, a good description of her gorging, & belly growth ! I think it would be so cool to see my own belly explode with guts, blood, ribs, skin, fat, body fluids,  & chewed food going out onto the spectator audience getting sprayed more than ever before ! Making me the latest Champion of Pop-That-Belly for ever, because no one else could ever hold or not hold that much food again ! 
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Brubake Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2017
So why would someone die for nothing ? Unless they already knew they were going to die a painful death from Cancer or something even worst like Alzheimer's because it has no chance of being reversed once it gets bad ! Their surviving family members must get a big fat check, right ? Or can the contestants be repaired by surgery or cartoon belly repair tape? Therefore they get to cash the check themselves?
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maxnine Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2016
gosh and I thought vore was an hilariously absurd fetish but this I think takes the medal ,im going to go on a show to literally explode and probably kill/cripple my self permanently because.....reasons!, bwt dam good writing ill be taking a look into your work when I have the time.

ps the point of something like this I would presume is because you enjoy writing yes? if not then id like to know why you engage in this hobby out of curiousity
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awesomesir Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2016  Student Digital Artist
I like to write, yes.

The fetish and premise of the story is absurd, yes

Although I haven't been in the mood to write in a long while, motivation is failing me
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nightrooster Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2014
Are you gonna have another sequel?
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awesomesir Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Yes, sorry it's taking a while, I'm kinda distracted a bit, but it'll happen
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bradypig Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014
Excellent!  I want to be in the contest!!
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awesomesir Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Oh haha! I would recommend it but I love the enthusiasm!
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thebellyburster Featured By Owner May 20, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That was AWESOME!!! Who will be on the next episode?
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awesomesir Featured By Owner May 20, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Still working on that, but the basic concept is twins.
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thebellyburster Featured By Owner May 22, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
HELL YES
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coolestawesome10 Featured By Owner May 18, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
If I'm paying $60+ for manufacturing then how much is it actually worth? Just say'n
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awesomesir Featured By Owner May 19, 2014  Student Digital Artist
$60 plus all those additional costs would be about +$150
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coolestawesome10 Featured By Owner May 19, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
If I was a millionaire who doesn't understand the economy I say "Sold!"
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Sidkid44 Featured By Owner May 16, 2014
I know you said in a previous comment that you probably wouldn't do a follow up to this for a while, but you'd definitely have my support if you do decide to turn this into a series. It has that fun formula to it that would make it fun to revisit again and again.

Its always refreshing to see quality belly popping lit and I do enjoy that everyone in the story is awaiting the impending explosion.

If I had one or two critiques, it would be to describe the contestants more so us readers can have a good mental picture of them as we read. Maybe more description of the build up to the popping too? Just some suggestions :)

Overall, great stuff and I can't wait to see more!
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awesomesir Featured By Owner May 16, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Whether I'd make this into a series is all based on ideas. If you're willing, we could brainstorm some ideas for a series. I don't know. Nothing comes to mind at the moment, but feel free to help.

Also thanks for the critique, I always had a problem with figuring out whether I have too much or too little detail (even though the answer is usually "too little") so I'll work on being more descriptive. Thank you

Also thank you for the appraisal. Coming from you means a lot to me!
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Sidkid44 Featured By Owner May 16, 2014
Sure thing! I'd love to think up some ideas with you, man, just send me a note and maybe we can discuss it :)

And if you like, maybe I can whip up some illustrations for them in the near future.
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awesomesir Featured By Owner May 17, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Aaaaaaaa I'd love that and this and those! I'm getting excited *clears throat* alright, I'll be sending a note now
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lopni Featured By Owner May 16, 2014  Student Filmographer
My motivation is: it's fun.

I can of course say that I'm grateful to community for helping me survive lonely time, so now I kinda feel obliged to do something. But "it's fun" is number one motivation anyway.
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awesomesir Featured By Owner May 16, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Its as good as any other motivation to stuff yourself. "Because I can" is another good one
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lopni Featured By Owner May 16, 2014  Student Filmographer
lol

That's a good one!

I always wonder whether ladies ever get such motivation. May be I should ask them ^_^
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awesomesir Featured By Owner May 16, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Maybe! :3
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lopni Featured By Owner May 16, 2014  Student Filmographer
I'm not into stuffing, and it's not clear what's in this for the poppers (pleasure? money for families? fame? ... )

But there's this classic feel in the story, as if it was written quite some time ago.

I miss the times where stories were na´ve, and people found joy in thorough descriptions of the process. Such classic stories are fun, they don't leave hard feelings, and you enjoy them for a long time after reading, as a good wine.

Thank you!
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awesomesir Featured By Owner May 16, 2014  Student Digital Artist
I don't why they do it. Probably a mixture of both pleasure and fame. Also to contribute to a good cause (as it says at the end, in super small text "A small portion of the earnings is donated to the national organization of “Lets End World Hunger Already Association”)

And a classic feel? Ooooh, gives me goosebumps finding out my stories have all these hidden elements. Someone else once told me I have a surreal sense of humor to my writing. aaaaaaa

You are very Welcome!

and thank you
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FaintingHeart Featured By Owner May 14, 2014
You've really nailed the vital part of bursting stories that is the anticipation and buildup towards the explosive finale. While most of the time a lot of the fun comes from the fact we know what the story is building up to but the burstee is unaware until its far too late, you use the fact that everyone is in on the suspense to great affect here. There's something special about a story where the girl's set out to blow herself up, and everyone's cheering her along.

Great job, I'm looking forward to whatever you put out next.
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awesomesir Featured By Owner May 14, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Aaaa, thank you for these lovely words! I'm so glad you love it!

your love powers my motivation!
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TheTallTale Featured By Owner May 13, 2014
I want an AutoMow! 
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awesomesir Featured By Owner May 14, 2014  Student Digital Artist
I would relieve a great burden, I'll tell ya that
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Uniquename02 Featured By Owner May 13, 2014
Oh man, I LOVE this story!  I feel this should be a series, and maybe even have a duel segment where two ladies sees who pops last (or first xD)
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awesomesir Featured By Owner May 14, 2014  Student Digital Artist
As awesome as that sounds! I'm currently already working on a series, and this series is making me hate all series. I probably won't make one for a while, even after I finish this one ^^; buy great idea either way!
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Uniquename02 Featured By Owner May 14, 2014
Hey, whatever you do, just keep being awesome :)
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senorpapel Featured By Owner May 13, 2014
always been a big fan of the gameshow concept, though this is the first i've seen where the popping is the point of the show and not an accident.
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awesomesir Featured By Owner May 14, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Yes, originality is my odd strong suit. I also did this story to use a phrase that I forgot about when I was finishing it.

"I'm so happy, I could explode!"

aw well, gotta find another story to use it
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senorpapel Featured By Owner May 14, 2014
could have one with a girl who keeps getting exceedingly good luck throughout a day, getting free food and drinks and then goes boom after eating the last one. Other idea could be girl expands depending on her mood, and one day she jut has soo many good things happen to her that she literally bursts from happiness.
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awesomesir Featured By Owner May 14, 2014  Student Digital Artist
All good ideas, but I'll think of something, don't you worry about it
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